Hi all,
Here is my observation, please correct me if I am wrong:
A. comparison between salaries and college-educated professionals is wrong, it is already mentioned that salaries lag behind, hence of use of less seems redundant
B. A. comparison between salaries and college-educated professionals is wrong, up to and nearly - almost convey same meaning hence redundancy
C. again use of less when we already have "lag behind" in non-underlined portion seems redundant
D. use of up to and nearly together and use of less and lag behind- Redundancy
E. no such redundancy and parallelism well maintained.
Here is my observation, please correct me if I am wrong:
A. comparison between salaries and college-educated professionals is wrong, it is already mentioned that salaries lag behind, hence of use of less seems redundant
B. A. comparison between salaries and college-educated professionals is wrong, up to and nearly - almost convey same meaning hence redundancy
C. again use of less when we already have "lag behind" in non-underlined portion seems redundant
D. use of up to and nearly together and use of less and lag behind- Redundancy
E. no such redundancy and parallelism well maintained.