Transcendentalist wrote:
pnf619 wrote:
To conclude,the argument has several flaws it could be substantially strengthened if the author had mentioned all the relevant facts and provided relevant examples. In order to assess the merits of the situation, one needs to have full knowledge of all relevant facts.
I believe "it" should be replaced by "that"
An overdose of "relevant". I would recommend redoing this last bit
Thanks for the recommendation +1 kudos
