In September 2011, Michael John Dalton organized a seven days training program on new findings that indicates a child's learning behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as a natural process that finishes up until the age of five.
(A) that indicates a child's learning behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as
Wrong. "findings" is plural ==> singular verb "indicates" is wrong.
(B) to indicate that when a child learns behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills, that it is
Wrong.
- "it" refers to nothing.
- If the structure is parallel ==> there should be "and" before the second "that". ==> to indicate that...and that....
(C) indicative of a child's learning of behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as
Wrong.
- "X indicative of Y as Z" is not correct idiom. The correct one is "X indicative of Y". For example: behavior indicative of mental disorder.
(D) indicating that a child's learning of behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills is
Correct.
- "indicating" is verb-ing modifier ==> modifies "findings"
- Correct idiom: indicating that X is (infinitive without "to") Y
(E) that are indicative of a child learning behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as
Wrong.
- "X that are indicative of Y as Z" is not correct idiom. The correct one is "X indicative of Y". For example: behavior indicative of mental disorder.
Hope it helps.
(A) that indicates a child's learning behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as
Wrong. "findings" is plural ==> singular verb "indicates" is wrong.
(B) to indicate that when a child learns behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills, that it is
Wrong.
- "it" refers to nothing.
- If the structure is parallel ==> there should be "and" before the second "that". ==> to indicate that...and that....
(C) indicative of a child's learning of behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as
Wrong.
- "X indicative of Y as Z" is not correct idiom. The correct one is "X indicative of Y". For example: behavior indicative of mental disorder.
(D) indicating that a child's learning of behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills is
Correct.
- "indicating" is verb-ing modifier ==> modifies "findings"
- Correct idiom: indicating that X is (infinitive without "to") Y
(E) that are indicative of a child learning behavioral, cognitive, and fine-motor skills as
Wrong.
- "X that are indicative of Y as Z" is not correct idiom. The correct one is "X indicative of Y". For example: behavior indicative of mental disorder.
Hope it helps.